The music was good, if maybe a bit too clinical and generic. I'm not a huge fan of the vocals though, which remind me a bit too much of Scott Stapp. I'm not sure if that's just your style or if you're forcing that throaty sound, or whatever that is, but it doesn't sound that great to my ears.
The vocals also sound a bit flat in many places and perhaps a bit off tempo with the rest of the song. I also felt that the vocal track had too much reverb/delay and is a bit too prominent in the mix. I liked the screaming though. I'm not sure the piano intro / outro really worked either.
I look forward to hearing more from you two.