I liked the song overall and thought you did a lot of interesting things, but I just didn't feel that there was much variety and uniqueness here to really grab hold of me. I really liked the beginning, but the song quickly got a bit tedious. The track itself is too long on its own. I did like what you did with the synths though.
I see you tagged Meshuggah. I tend to feel similarly about their music so maybe it's just me, but I feel that Meshuggah gets quite tedious after a while, and I really never go back and listen to their albums. Nothing really kicks me in the sack and makes me want more, except maybe the main riff to Rational Gaze, but even that gets tedious quickly. Almost all of their albums sound the same to me after awhile.